EVALUATION Q3

What have you learned from your audience feedback ?

From this section of my audience feedback from my advertisement poster I can see where i could have made improvements with making the trees lighter and text bigger but I also think my poster is realisticly a good advertisment poster. I tried changeing the levels when editing the poster in photoshop but it changed all the other levels of the image like over exposing the sky etc. As for the text it could have been clearer butthe bottom right corner blends so well with the colours and the theme of the poster i didnt want the text to stand out too much.

There was a lot of the same feedback i got from my poster for my second page newspaper like the image being too dull and leading to low quality but again i tried brightening the image but it changed the whole picture however i realise my image could be lighter. I also realise i need to add to the bottom of my newspaper as the framing and composition looks off from the way the page dosent seem to fit a A3 scale. I also got some good feedback about the smaller image i used as it linked the poster and newspaper together by using the same image, also about the contact details and advert section  as my audience feedback said it makes the page for realistic and believable.

Alot of my peers commented on the picture I used and said it was unclear,grainy etc. but i can jusitfy this as i edited the picture to look like this to create the effect of new journalism where as the journalist/editors get pictures from the public from low quality cameras and mobile phones etc, so when the image is blew up to the scale it is bad quality. as it matches the story line of a high celebrity who dosent want to be photographed hence the compostition of walking and not facing the camera directly. Other things that my peers commented on was how my text is unclear but like all conventional newspaper the text is very small maybe even smaller on the front cover but again its just the paper my work was printed out on as when the cover in open in photoshop we can read the text perfectly. The audience seemed to think that the strip of advertisements and feature stories was a good idea as its a common conventiona again making my newspaper more realistic.